I gotta tell you something!
Thursday, May 15, 2008
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Two more hours in hand, after that they both have to leave for their respective destinations. This meeting was just by chance and next is just uncertain but not very soon they both knew. Both wanted to live just "fullest" in these two hours.Comforting in a coffee shop, with mocha it was heart melting out on that chilly evening. Both were feeling mum and something very srange which they couldn't express by using any of five senses. It was getting late and the "moment' was coming closer. Soon they left towards her accomodation. Making her felt "cared & loved", he was caputuring every glance of her in his heart. She went up; to keep her bag in room, quickly combed hair and left for quick walk with him. Just for an excuse to be together, they chose to have tea once again at near by stall. Sipping out moment on that evening was hard on both mind and soul. Finally the last call of time, she stood in front of her room and called for a cab. He asked the driver if he can drop him to station,he kept his bag on seat and bent towards her, touching her waist he kissed on forhead and said "I love you Sweetheart". She saw him for all last glance till taxi took turn adding to crowd out there, silently she expressed "i'll miss you".
posted by Jyoti at 10:05 PM
22 Comments:
you took me right there .... I guess I was part of the plot too :) (perhaps .....)
Alok
wow...what a compliment..
thanks buddy :)
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very good blog, keep writing jyoti gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg.
take care
bye
nice write up!!!!!
wow !!
GOOD NARRATION..:)
who is the lucky guy ??
heheh fir se love story shuru ??
koi na .. jab kuch kaam na ho to yahi hota... keep continue..:P
smooth 'n' romantic !!
:( I don't like it when people part. U've written it well...
@imran jaladhari: Thanks
@preetisoni: Thanks sweetie pie
@huh? wmi?:;p thanks for dropping by
@deepak: Nahi boss,sirf dimag ki ek khujli hi likhi thi
@influential deepu:thank you thankyou
@Shruti: all i can say is "we meet to depart and we depart to meet"
eh ?
dunt call me BOSS..huh?
:D
nicely written....:)
keep writing!!!
painting idea's on canvas....!
a pretty romantic picture i must say. and very well written nd executed... i specially love the subtle way of them spliting apart. nd the echoing of the last words... "i'll miss you".. she would miss him indeed.
beautiful.
thanks for visiting my blog sir. i m humbled. hope to see u ther often.
ooouch! i called u sir there... i m soo sorry... :) redin ur second post nd realised mah mistake. :)
@Deepak: oh! So sorry...i recalled your meeting.
@kp!:Thanks buddy
@casperbaba: thankgod you realised it.
I wish you could have been a bit more vivid. For it sounded all to normal.
very very very romantic..
hey friends, this is ishqia. a new blogger.
i can understand how it is to part. for i have experienced.
@jeya:Well, i tried my best
@ishqia: Welcome to this blogworld. I am sure you gonna enjoy it.
Thanks for your visit too :)
thanks for welcoming and welcome for thanks. do visit my blog too..
will be glad.:):)
1942 A Love Story....Nice
@ishqia:sure baby :)
@raghu ram prasad: oh! so you are back on my blog.
u parted ways forever?? tell me ur still in tuch!!!
made a new orkut community for bloggers .id like to invite u. its pretty interactive and is a nice way to get ur blog out there for others to read.
http://www.orkut.com/Community.aspx?cmm=51446226
atleast have a look
Keep writing
Cheers
Chris
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